
Friday, September 23, 2011
"A Morsel from the Garden of Eden"
The first sentences are simplisitic in nature, which is perfect to start the story off and grab the readers attention. After pulling you in, the author then describes the basic scenario. Only the significant facts are presented, and many visuals are created by the author. Most memorable is when the grandpa laid eyes upon the cart full of goodies. The excitement within the man was well described by the author. There is no specific section of important dialogue, but there is dialogue throughout that helps set the scene. This story is easy to follow, and easily relatable to someone who helps take care of their grandparents. The conclusion completely ties the story together, and ends it with the humorous vibe that was apparent throughout. This story shows that the simplest of things can bring infinite joy to an individual; they only need to take time to appreciate what is in front of them.
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